On The Wings of A Dove

On The Wings of A Dove

A Poem by *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
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Inspired by a dove on the window sill of my apartment in NYC, building a nest.

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If you could only listen to my heart

Singing its own tune

I often wonder what you would hear

As if it had a voice of its own.

 

Beating softly spoken secrets

Whenever you're on my mind.

The fluttering thoughts

Of what our love really became.

 

Gone, but never forgotten

As my pen scribbles to it's own beat

Reminiscing word that were never said

How much our love really meant.

 

I'd send my words to you, wherever you are

All on the wings of a dove,

To have one more moment to cherish

And be in your arms once more.

© 2012 *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*


Author's Note

*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
Inspired by a dove on the window sill of my apartment in NYC, building a nest. This just suddenly came out after it flew away. Hmm...

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Anna Rose, you're on fire! I can barely keep up...I listened to your heart and It has a beautiful song. Sung like the coo of the dove. This is just lovely writing and tugs at the puppet strings of the heart...I can't pick favorite lines because I love them all.
Great job from a tender heart...

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Sounds like a beautiful song...

Posted 7 Years Ago


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great poem :) i really liked this :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I thought this was pretty inspiring. It was really interesting and had a certain mystery behind it that gave it feeling. Loved it :)


Posted 7 Years Ago


I love the expression of love here. The dove is a symbol of purity, which only adds to the effect. I also love how you mention your "pen scribbling to it's own beat" Often when I write, I mention my love for writing and it's not always the writer that brings the words. Anyway, Wonderful!!!!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lovely! We find such inspiration in myriad things, the dove obviously sparked the heart for you, special! xoxo

Posted 7 Years Ago


i feel your tender touch of words that flow from your pen into my heart this is such a beautiful poem and each word flowed into the next word am new here and i dont no about your ratings in here so if you would come by and check out my poem and tell me what the ratings are in here cause i would give you a high rating on your lovely poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is just beautiful and shows your passion and classic quality. Excellent write

Posted 7 Years Ago


This poem captivated me. Thanks for posting, it was excellent!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like this piece in the process that I was imaging the scene in my head. In the hustling city, a dove building a home on a window sill, with a female looking out to the inspiration.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amazing i love it and sorry for the typo below

Posted 7 Years Ago



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*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

Somewhere between TN and NYC, TN



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My name is Anna Rose... what can I say about myself? I'm 20 learning to live on my own, trying to escape from a dark part of my life. Been writing my heart since I was able to write. I write whate.. more..

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