Waterfall

 

Let my darkness surrender

To lustful beauty.

The tender hues of sapphire blue

Wash all my broken tears away.

 

Comfort my sorrows

Everlasting and infinite.

Feeling as if I am falling...

Floating, from heaven's clouds.

 

I watch all my yesterdays

Gently float off to sea

As I am overcome with serenity

 I start to feel alive once again.

Reviews

[zero binty]

This place sounds amazing. Driving through the Philippines, watching waterfalls so many years ago, the mere memories of them would bring me peace. Nowadays the memories have faded, but pieces such as yours resurrect them. Thank you for this.

[Katelyn]

Amazing piece of work! I love this. And the picture is perfect (:

[TPK Stories]

Loved how you captured the feeling with the waterfall...

[MusicLover]

i cant say anything...... jus wow

[Revery]

Wow, so sweet and tranquil, You have articulated that place of peace that revitalizes the soul.

[Cassie Fraga]

mmmmmm.... such a soft write... very nice word play, your words to image is BEAUTIFUL!!
thank you for sharing such a sweet piece dear sistah!!

[Hidden Happiness]

i really love this and i wish something so gentle like the waterfall could wash away all my sorrows....really amazing and the picture's magnificent...great job:):)...

[Lovely Soul]

I really like this one. I can relate to this well. I once felt my life was over and that i was only living in darkness and death. Love gave me new life. Thanks for sharing. Good work.

[Dayran]

A life rediscovered like a breath given up to breathe in anew. Nice write!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

beautifully expressed...liked it very much.