A Poem by *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*


Let my darkness surrender

To lustful beauty.

The tender hues of sapphire blue

Wash all my broken tears away.


Comfort my sorrows

Everlasting and infinite.

Feeling as if I am falling...

Floating, from heaven's clouds.


I watch all my yesterdays

Gently float off to sea

As I am overcome with serenity

 I start to feel alive once again.

© 2012 *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

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I love this picture and used it on one of my rights so seeing what you wrote makes me smile.. There's something about the majestic beauty and power that live inside the current and flow of water.. All emotions .. grace, smooth, powerful, cold, warm, comforting or swept away.. I love it all..xo :) excellent write..x

Posted 8 Years Ago

Peaceful serene art as well as the words, beautifully written!

Posted 8 Years Ago

amazing and very deep, i can imagine the place and i really like it, wish i was there right now !! xD
Your poem is full of deep descriptions, you used every word at the top of its meaning, i see you pay attention to the words you use, you chose the ones that fit the best with your thoughts =D

Posted 8 Years Ago

love the picture, absolutely gorgeous. I like the perspective you took of the water fall. Nice job.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Another great write! You have such a wonderful talent :)
I get a peaceful feeling and a sense of renewal...

Posted 8 Years Ago

I love this poem, it's amazing.
It flows beautifully.
Very well written.
And the picture is brilliant, by the way :D

Posted 8 Years Ago

expressions are so well penned

Posted 8 Years Ago

This combination attaches if it were a magnet and I am made of stress cracked steel welded back together through this soulful painting. Becoming whole again, for we are all mostly whole given the chance......

Posted 8 Years Ago

beautiful piece and an incredible picture used. I personally think the adding pictures that tie in with our writing makes a piece even more special. Bravo!

Posted 8 Years Ago

1st off i love the picture used,
2ndly i love the write, so lovely and captivating.
Much enjoyed.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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30 Reviews
Shelved in 2 Libraries
Added on April 19, 2012
Last Updated on April 19, 2012


*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

Somewhere between TN and NYC, TN

My name is Anna Rose... what can I say about myself? I'm 20 learning to live on my own, trying to escape from a dark part of my life. Been writing my heart since I was able to write. I write whate.. more..


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