Remember Me

Remember Me

A Poem by *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
"

First loves are mostly always the ones that are the most memorable.

"

And let the ocean waves speak

Whispering the words

I hold deep within my soul for you.

 

Do you remember the love we shared

So long ago when the world gazed.

Our burning sunset along the horizons

When we met for the first time.

 

Fantasies of love we desired,

Became our treasures of gold.

Our smiles of joy and laughter echoed

As the waves crashed at our feet.

 

Remember our eyes speaking for us

We promised to hold these moments

And lock them tightly within our hearts

Burying them beneath the sand.

 

Our hopes and dreams of forever

Glistened beneath the sunbeams

As we watched our love quickly fade

Without reasons, I will never understand.

 

 

© 2012 *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*


Author's Note

*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
Artwork by Tolkienmaster of DeviantArt.com

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Do you remember the love we shared
So long ago when the world gazed.
Our burning sunset along the horizons
When we met for the first time.



i really love this lines...
it's beautiful! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


i love this sorry it took me forever to get to it

Posted 7 Years Ago


the wording was beautiful, it created such great imagery, too, The ending seems to hold so much truth to it...good write

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful and romantic....

Posted 7 Years Ago


Marvellous reworking of a former experience when the world was new and man and beast were young. Nice write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


very touching...and sometimes a strange fact to come across.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Moving , the second stanza is particularly beautiful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful artwork and I like the poem. The story of love and the memory of missed lover's will haunt our dreams forever. I like the questions in your poem. Sometime we will never understand a hello or a goodbye. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Intense and beautiful. I like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful, and true :) I like it

Posted 8 Years Ago



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My name is Anna Rose... what can I say about myself? I'm 20 learning to live on my own, trying to escape from a dark part of my life. Been writing my heart since I was able to write. I write whate.. more..

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