Disturbia

Disturbia

A Poem by *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
"

My sleepless nights.

"

Shivering spine tingles with fright

Knock, knocking on my chamber door.

The dance of fright and be afraid

Shadows waltz upon the walls.

 

Insanity rages in serpeant's delight

Abducted by the fear of glowing eyes

Chains and burning needles

Stinging claws that scratch against skin.

 

The jackyll's hysterical laughter,

Echoes through my mind as I try hard

To return to some sense of reality

A calming dreamland that awaits me.

 

 

© 2012 *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*


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I like the description of trying to find sleep. I like the description of wild thoughts and places.
"The dance of fright and be afraid
Shadows waltz upon the walls."
Good to find sleep. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote



Posted 8 Years Ago


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WOW! this is amazing!! *u* such haunting piece.. it gives me chills. Love it. i love how you describe the insanity.. hehee. I love this! Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


great piece

Posted 8 Years Ago


I could feel the insanity...clever writing. Insomnia never looked so good. ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love it! The second line reminded me of Gun's & Rose's song "Knockin' On Heaven's Door" because it sounded like the line "Knock, knock, knockin' on heavens do-o-or (HEY, HEY, HEY, HEY, HEY!!!)" (gotta love that screamo part).

But anyways, this is totally going in my library for sure :)

Sincerely,
Maddie

Posted 8 Years Ago


Loved the flow of the words....

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is so wonderful, thank u!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a very interesting poem. It makes me picture a small child who is afraid and alone. Nice write. Well done. (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


Our own minds can be the harshest place we can dwell. Often not by choice. Great write

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is different from your usual writing.....

but you've pulled it off quite well

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sometimes, I get terrified while falling asleep too. Everything seems so creepy, though the dreams are where I feel better (unless it is a nightmare, of course). The powerful words, descriptions, are great to read, leaves a shivering fear, lights the torment, and well, great job as always.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

Somewhere between TN and NYC, TN



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My name is Anna Rose... what can I say about myself? I'm 20 learning to live on my own, trying to escape from a dark part of my life. Been writing my heart since I was able to write. I write whate.. more..

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