Are You Still With Me

 

 

 

Dreams in ivory midnight skies,

A gazing glow through my window pane.

In the silence, your whispers gently

Flow in the soft breezes of emptiness.

 

I feel your fingertips carassing my cheeks

Slowly combing through my hair

As I enter into my own reality,

A world where there is only me and you.

 

I hear your gentle spoken voice

Echoing stings in my broken heart.

The pieces that forever lay broken,

A missing piece, never to be replaced.

 

Like a ghost, you linger in the shadows

Mourning for me as I have mourned for you,

To feel the embrace of our reality

And share each other's moments once more.

 

My heart yearns to hear your voice,

To see the smiling face that holds my dreams

Sleepless and broken, it screams for you

Wondering if you're still here with me.

 

 

Author's Note

Artwork Spring Mourningby *Ellyevans679 of deviantart.com

Reviews

[TawnyBlueStar]

beautiful :D goes really well with the picture ^^
in my library :D

[Monica]

I love it! It's well written and beautifully told!
I love the last stanza...powerful words.
The poem...the picture...the title...are all perfect. They compliment each other well to tell a heart breaking story.

[Ink Angel]

this poem has everything, it s the best one yet, it has heart break, romance and such deep emotion. I love it. Its like a classical masterpiece. The third stanza is my favourite. Thank you. The begin took my breath away.

[bluessadmood]

Ohh so lovely ,i just loved the title ..are you still with me
in my dreams ,i could feel you like through my window you appear
what shape and voice coming into my world big enough only for you
i hear you ,and you touch like a smooth breeze just hit my face
how i adore your presence wish you never leave ,touch my hair
like no one ever did ,how you could only do it that way
i will always wait for you ..you were always near
i was never that emotional,ha ha ,but really your words are so compelling
lovely write..

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

First off I did to you what people do to me LOL made off with your art. This poem is perfect for this image......what beautiful poetry......

[Heromen Selena]

Beautiful. I love how you didn't bother to make it rhyme. It made my heart ping in pain as I was reading this. Very well done.

[KAREN]

So emotional, and filled with heart acking pain. Your words flow really well.

[Shin ( formerly known a..]

You're cute.

[Starrbitt]

This is amazing, I also love the artwork, everything in this poem is filled with a shattered heart wishing for something to heal it with... anyway, I love it!! keep writing!!