Together Again

Together Again

A Poem by *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

Milford Sound in New Zealand

 

 

 

Love, dreams, and darkness

Collide in a cosmic burst.

Longing to be in your arms again,

In world that I once called home.

 

A million dollars in coins,

Thrown down a wishing well.

Velveteen hopes and thoughts

Diminish with a small splash.

 

Minutes and hours go by,

As the ticking clock comforts

Lonely thoughts and broken memories

Swirling in the abyss of my own mind.

 

I patiently wait inside my burning heart

When reality's nightmare shall fade.

Someday I know we will meet again,

We are all just a dream in the end.

 

© 2012 *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*


Author's Note

*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
Somewhat inspired my Evanescence's Together Again. I'm not so sure I'm satisfied, but it was a attempt to jump start my brain.

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i like it...it's nicely written.
there's full of hope in it..


its beautiful!


Posted 9 Years Ago


This is beautiful! No matter what, we shouldn't stop dreaming...and its true! one day all the darkness will fade away and we will find true light, true love... you have grasped the topic beautifully in the lines.. Keep up the good work :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love the second stanza! I think it is well written!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I patiently wait inside my burning heart
When reality's nightmare shall fade.
Someday I know we will meet again,
We are all just a dream in the end.

Wow. this is beautiful :))

Posted 11 Years Ago


Great pathos all over the poem, it was very intense !!
First 3 stanzas are characterized by a very dark and sad atmosphere though, fortunately, last verse gives a glimpse of hope working just like the "light at the end of the tunnel" :)
Great job, especially in the choice of words that provide a great help creating the atmosphere

Posted 11 Years Ago


This has a classic fairy tale to a brilliant nightmare of reality, I can see how Evensescene was the inspiration.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Artwork and words were amazing. I like the hope and memories in the poem. I like the desire of hope at the close of this poem. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


wonderful. A very enjoyable poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


A beautiful picture of hope....

Posted 11 Years Ago


The picture is beautiful, it captured me before I even had a chance to read the poem and I love Evanescence's music.
This is a beautiful poem, you did an amazing job at jump starting your brain :) I love the first stanza and the imagery you created throughout.
Well done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

Somewhere between TN and NYC, TN



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My name is Anna Rose... what can I say about myself? I'm 20 learning to live on my own, trying to escape from a dark part of my life. Been writing my heart since I was able to write. I write whate.. more..

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