Fireflies

Fireflies

A Poem by *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
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Memories of love and another broken heart.

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Milford Sound in New Zealand

 

 

The midnight sky smiled brightly,

Upon the trees swaying in the moonlight.

Gentle breezes whisper from the shadows,

This will be one night to forever remember.

 

Gems shined along the horizons of the Earth

As glittering tears fell from universal skies.

Telling a tale all their own of distant memories

Held within a trail of flames falling behind them.

 

I stared forever into your blue velvet eyes,

Searching for an answer to a common riddle.

Love's burning temptations, reoccuring dreams

Can I finally consider you mine?

 

The galaxies of us intertwined

For one moment inside your tender kiss.

Fireflies fluttered about around us,

Flickering endless sparks as my heart sank.

 

I captured each moment of you,

And locked them tightly within a jar.

As you walked out on my heart,

I wished upon a star for you to return to me.

© 2012 *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*


Author's Note

*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
Artwork by CrushedSilence of Deviantart.com

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The picture is beautiful. Your words...incredible. You wrote of romance with tender kisses and endless sparks then added the sadness of watching your love "walk out on my heart"...you penned this beautifully. It is impossible to read
this and not love it, great job!!





Posted 8 Years Ago


"I captured each moment of you,
And locked them tightly within a jar.
As you walked out on my heart,
I wished upon a star for you to return to me."

A sad but hopeful moment from this beautifully poetic romantic...You've go it going on sweetie, keep up your wonderful creative expressions...


Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a masterpiece, sad but uplifting with choice of beatiful words, this sort of poetry keeps me going. The secound stanza is beautiful. Thankyou. Love the picture

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a gorgeous write! Fireflies captivate with their mystical wonders... and you have mesmerized me with your surreal love story (of memories)...so bittersweet.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh So beautiful !

Posted 8 Years Ago


To mix the magic of fireflies with the magic of love is genius. It is so magical when my children go out in the early summer catching fire flies. This is an incredibly beautiful write, just lovely.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is Beautiful
I love the way you use words ;3

Posted 8 Years Ago


This such a beloved read. I like the descriptions of space and everything. I seriously need to get back into the habit of writing poetry and maybe I can get inspiration from this. I need inspiration these days. And your writing surely gives me the influence I need. Loved this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I can't say enough on how beautiful this was. I fell in love it it from the start. The imagery is amazing and everything else is just beautiful. Nice work.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

Somewhere between TN and NYC, TN



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My name is Anna Rose... what can I say about myself? I'm 20 learning to live on my own, trying to escape from a dark part of my life. Been writing my heart since I was able to write. I write whate.. more..

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