Fireflies

Fireflies

A Poem by *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
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Memories of love and another broken heart.

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Milford Sound in New Zealand

 

 

The midnight sky smiled brightly,

Upon the trees swaying in the moonlight.

Gentle breezes whisper from the shadows,

This will be one night to forever remember.

 

Gems shined along the horizons of the Earth

As glittering tears fell from universal skies.

Telling a tale all their own of distant memories

Held within a trail of flames falling behind them.

 

I stared forever into your blue velvet eyes,

Searching for an answer to a common riddle.

Love's burning temptations, reoccuring dreams

Can I finally consider you mine?

 

The galaxies of us intertwined

For one moment inside your tender kiss.

Fireflies fluttered about around us,

Flickering endless sparks as my heart sank.

 

I captured each moment of you,

And locked them tightly within a jar.

As you walked out on my heart,

I wished upon a star for you to return to me.

© 2012 *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*


Author's Note

*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
Artwork by CrushedSilence of Deviantart.com

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That 4th stanza is oh so beautiful.. I love fireflies ( in a sense, or in essence)... Wonderful imagery throughout

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wonderful write , touching last stanza

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh wow, i totally loved that last stanza, this is amazing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


The midnight sky smiled brightly,
Upon the trees swaying in the moonlight. - I think that there is one 'midnight' extra, repeats too often in such short time,
but taken all considered, it is great! smoothing, tender and an easy introduction to the real topic-love. love it. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Loved this. Oh how awesome fireflies can be! There was a great magical feel to your words, flowing from stanza to stanza. It was great.

Posted 8 Years Ago


very romantic and beautiful. great job here. Simply lovely.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Firefly wishes, dreams and kisses.. this is beautifully written. I felt myself sink deeper and deeper into each word as I read on..xo

Posted 8 Years Ago



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My name is Anna Rose... what can I say about myself? I'm 20 learning to live on my own, trying to escape from a dark part of my life. Been writing my heart since I was able to write. I write whate.. more..

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