I think I broke

I think I broke

A Poem by AliceWithAButterflySoul

Oh little one
It's way too late
Don't tell me about your embrace
You cherished my heart?
Well it once was there
But it seemed as if you didn't care
You say the other didn't know how to treat me right
That you'd be there to hold me tight
That may be true, but only for a while

Then it's always about the "we"
How "we care"
Once again, you two DON'T care
You let me fall
You let me break
Now I believe, my life's a mistake
You didn't wish to cherish my heart
It's shattered
It's gone
Maybe it was never here
I cry because it is way too late
Maybe i'll meet you at heaven's gate
Or is it so, I am hell bound
Because I have more than I can bear
Wow, I just wish you could see me here
I'm empty
I'm alone
Even though you are sitting RIGHT THERE
I'm broken
I'm lost
Maybe even a lost cause
You saw the scars
You saw the attempt
Words on a screen meant to pump my heart to life
When I always try to talk to you to your face
Try to hold you
Try to wipe your tears
Why don't you want to come near me?
I'm trying to climb your f*****g wall but I keep

© 2014 AliceWithAButterflySoul

Author's Note

Probably my most angry piece. Please tell me what you think.

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"Probably my most angry piece." I read that and then I read this poem with a more aggressive tone. I love the style and the ending. As usual, good work :)

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Added on February 3, 2014
Last Updated on February 5, 2014
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