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Searching for Mercy

Searching for Mercy

A Poem by Butterflymom
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...another attempt at Haiku while coping with some of life's tickles

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Touch my wounded skin

On the winter of my soul

Heal my broken heart

 

 

© 2009 Butterflymom


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Stunning.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great haiku! Thanks for sharing!! Good luck in my contest!!!! :)
-Alaska

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your attempt was a success!...the feeling simple and beautifully put..very nice haiku

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautifuly expressed- it created a touching image...

my warmest
bob

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like it. Short, but so beautiful. So magically accurate.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And your attempt is well done!........love the term winter of my soul! I can relate to it.
At times, it takes but one word to convey a book of thoughts, and I see these words as such an instance.
Sheila

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 21, 2009

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I am a Licensed Clinical Social Worker (psychotherapist) that has worked in the field for almost 20 years. My experience is vast, and I've worked with diverse populations. My interest in writing is t.. more..

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