LOVELESS

LOVELESS

A Poem by CAPOLAVORO
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I can't write romantic poems. Period.

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No sweet on tongue that taste so strong
I am Loveless in all day long
No bright on eyes that looks for light
I am Loveless right on this sight
No song on lip that it could keep
I am Loveless 'till morning deep
No feel of thrill that works my will
I am Loveless that it could kill
No tears of joy that serves a toy
I am Loveless and it annoys

No caress of bliss when in distress
I am Loveless with just no peace
No breath of warmth when there is storm
I am Loveless in all of form
No sign of hope when I can't cope
I am Loveless with no good scope
No rose of faith when trust comes failed
I am Loveless and that is nailed
No ring of gem that comes from him
I am Loveless than all of them

No sweet
No bright
No song
No feel
No tears
No caress
No breath
No sign
No rose
No ring
I am Loveless is my ending


© 2017 CAPOLAVORO


Author's Note

CAPOLAVORO
This is out from a real emotion that I have somewhere in the part of my hypothalamus which I believe is not working right now.

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This is a really nice one! I would say being loveless aint half bad 😉 you gotta be free haha
Regarding the style and context, I think you could tweak the words a bit for a better flow.
I liked the photo, it actually enhances the effect of your write.
Good work 👍

Posted 6 Years Ago


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This is lovely piece of work..taking out your emotion in the face of a writing is the best move..
Wonderful write..

Posted 6 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

6 Years Ago

Yes, Thank you so much Farhan. :)
I guess you are not...any how that was a deep description, how you felt at that particular moment...I loved it...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

6 Years Ago

But I am Surya. :) Lol anyway, Thank you so much for reading. I am happy to know you loved it.

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CAPOLAVORO
CAPOLAVORO

Cebu, 7, Philippines



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