I Am...

I Am...

A Poem by CreativeCookie
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The poem That gave me the idea to create the group "Writers/Dreamers". I refuse to call it my group, it belongs to all who join.

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I AM...

I  am a writer, a dreamer.

I wonder at others' toils and fears.

I hear music, a song, everywhere.

I see a story wherever I look.

I want to know how to give them to others.

I can help them to hope, to dream, to sing with me.

 

I pretend that the stories, the songs, are mine.

I feel the emotions, the words, the joy and laughter, the sorrow and pain.

I touch others hearts and find their deep sorrows they masterfully hide.

I worry with them, try to draw out their sadness and replace it with the love of my Lord and I.

I cry over the joys in life, it's sweet stories and songs.

I am a writer, a dreamer.

 

I understand what most no one else will.

I say what I see to help others belive.

I dream of flowered meadows and rivers shimmering and singing sweet.

I try to help others to see, to feel like me.

I am a writer, a dreamer.

© 2012 CreativeCookie


Author's Note

CreativeCookie
I tried to catch the essence or being of a writer, of a dreamer. I don't know how I did or if It's way off but I would appreciate your thoughts and your critisism concerning it. Thank you so much!
Love,
CreativeCookie

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First stanza:
We all march to our own music. I love your dreams,
but feel that your dreams are just that, dreams.
I always want to see the real person beneath the
dream.
Second stanza: Beautiful sentiments.
Third stanza: You are in the business of construction.
You are trying to build poets and philosophers out of ?

You see flowered meadows and rippling streams.
You bring this to the reader in the best way, in your
poetry. You are a builder of castles in the sky.
Beautifully done.
-----Eagle Cruagh

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
CreativeCookie

11 Years Ago

Thank you! The first stanza is just that, a dream, my dream. It has a little truth in it to though. .. read more



Reviews

Yeh, great.. I enjoyed reading this poem indeed from my heart. Every little word what should have in this write you used very nicely and well penned in every individual line. I loved this write after yeh... yeh, ok.. i got it, you're a writer and a dreamer of course :) I do agree .. i won't object .. Hhahaha :)
Don't you think that middle one stanza's awesome and well penned ! :) Nice write once again, i enjoyed reading this piece... keep writing, 'Cookieeee' :) 500/100 ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


First stanza:
We all march to our own music. I love your dreams,
but feel that your dreams are just that, dreams.
I always want to see the real person beneath the
dream.
Second stanza: Beautiful sentiments.
Third stanza: You are in the business of construction.
You are trying to build poets and philosophers out of ?

You see flowered meadows and rippling streams.
You bring this to the reader in the best way, in your
poetry. You are a builder of castles in the sky.
Beautifully done.
-----Eagle Cruagh

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
CreativeCookie

11 Years Ago

Thank you! The first stanza is just that, a dream, my dream. It has a little truth in it to though. .. read more
Love your poem! Beautifully written and well penned! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hey Cookie,
i just read your poem "I AM". I liked it very much. You have asked if the pictures were too much, so I wil be brutally honest with you... yes, i found the pictures to be distracting. The first one and the last one should stay. Perhaps you could make the other ones smaller so the reader won't get smacked in the face with a big one and lose their perspective.
Other than that, your poem is good.... it is a spirit lifting poem. Thank you for allowing us to read it.
Peace,
Jeanie S.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CreativeCookie

11 Years Ago

I thought so to, I took them off except for the two you mentioned. Thanks for the brutal honesty! I .. read more
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I thoroughly enjoyed it. It adds depth to your person. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Tuscaloosa, AL



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