UNTOUCHABLE

UNTOUCHABLE

A Poem by Carrie Montgomery

You, Love, are so much like the stars-
So very distant, So untouchable.
Yet, so bright and beautiful,
I have to try to reach you.

© 2008 Carrie Montgomery


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Short, sweet and definitely romantic. I like the comparison between love and the stars. Yes, love can be distant and out of reach. Nicely penned.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short and sweet... it maens soo much without saying much!! love it!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's so short..and yet it says a lot. Great work!
~Lauren

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved the power in so few words... and I can relate! Great piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 28, 2008

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Carrie Montgomery
Carrie Montgomery

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About Me I am a mother of 2. A 13 yr old and a 1 yr old.. happily married -depending what day it is!;) ~Self-Portrait~ tow-headed in summer's sun ;dirty-blonde in winter's chill.Eyes of green, w.. more..

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