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DRAGONFLY

DRAGONFLY

A Poem by Carrie Montgomery

delicate jewel

say good bye living rainbow

gossamer wings against blue

© 2008 Carrie Montgomery


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Beautiful imagery. I really love dragonflys and this does them justice. Not sure if you were actually intending for this to be a haiku or not, but if so the last line has too many syllables in it. Should only have 5, not 7. Haiku scheme is 5-7-5.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Wonderful Haiku

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neat haiku. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 25, 2008

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Carrie Montgomery
Carrie Montgomery

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About Me I am a mother of 2. A 13 yr old and a 1 yr old.. happily married -depending what day it is!;) ~Self-Portrait~ tow-headed in summer's sun ;dirty-blonde in winter's chill.Eyes of green, w.. more..

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