Brings me to Tears

Brings me to Tears

A Poem by Carrie Montgomery

The sun is on my back

you are on my mind

reasons not to be with you

are getting harder to find

you’ve been in my heart now

for so many years

finally saying "I love you"

brings me to tears

you make me feel special

you make me feel alive

but the love we share

we’d always have to hide

I never wished to cause you pain

or for you to feel you’d loved in vain

but there’s something about you

something I need

something that fills my heart with greed

I just wanted one moment

maybe just one kiss

just one chance to touch you

and see all that I have missed

you’ve been in my heart now

for so many years

finally saying "I love you"

brings me to tears

you make me feel special

you make me feel alive

but the love we share

we’d always have to hide

so...

You go your way

and I’ll go my own

I will leave your heart alone

but you’ve been in my heart now

for so many years

letting you go

brings me to tears

© 2009 Carrie Montgomery


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Carrie, my heart is filled with sadness, as i read your poem. Love can be a cruel and wonderful Mistress at the time, mixing joy with the sorrow. Sometimes, we just have to walk away, leaving our hearts in that place, which is inexcesssable to us. In order to protect us from further harm. Thank you for sharing this very emotional poem with us.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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amazing, Carrie...I like how you combined all of the joy AND the sorrow of loves exit...you give me inspiration...(you know me as Prosefully yours--I needed a new start)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Carrie, my heart is filled with sadness, as i read your poem. Love can be a cruel and wonderful Mistress at the time, mixing joy with the sorrow. Sometimes, we just have to walk away, leaving our hearts in that place, which is inexcesssable to us. In order to protect us from further harm. Thank you for sharing this very emotional poem with us.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Such gripping emotion, so sorry about this, i can feel the pain in this write, you write really wonderful, you have talent i hope you keep on writng, it helps soothes the soul.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Carrie what a painfully write but wonderfully done... sometimes circumstances cause love not to be enough and for the sake of our hearts being a part is better... nice expression of emotions.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Carrie Montgomery
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