Lost never Found

Lost never Found

A Poem by ChrisKeil

Run up the staris of the abondoned building


With a note in my pocket  which my pants are shielding


The note will explain my fall that would have a public traumatize


Just staring at the ground has my broken heart paralyzed


Leaving this world of the one girl that I cherish


Suddenly I turn around and see her causing a interference


but before she graps me I lunge towards death at the count of two


Leaving behind the note saying I did this because of you 

© 2010 ChrisKeil

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I love the ending especially; the last two line This piece has quite alot of mistakes in it but, aside from that, the meaning in the depths of it speaks volumes. And that's more than enough. Good job.

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