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Good-bye Spring Mourning

Good-bye Spring Mourning

A Poem by Wonderful Letdown
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With Spring, comes reminders from the past. Here is to letting go and remembering the joy this season used to bring.

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As the seasons change,
from Winter's deathly slumber
to the earth's rebirth in Spring.

With the changing tides,
breathes in memories of long since past.
Bittersweet images come flooding back,
kissing those halcyon days good-bye.

As the earth had awakened from its long repose,
he fell into eternal slumber's rest.
He closed his eyes forever
while the earth was beginning to open hers.

This Spring I am letting him go,
so that we can dance amongst the flowers
celebrating your life.

This Spring I say to you.....
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Good-bye.

© 2013 Wonderful Letdown


Author's Note

Wonderful Letdown
Aa. This is what Spring means to me this year. I wrote it for a contest....which I'm really mad at right now because it's limited to 100 words...max. There was another part I wanted to add but couldn't 'cause of it. *grumbles about stupid word limits*

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Congratulations in placing third in Tenshi's first writing theme contest!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wonderful Letdown

7 Years Ago

Thanks!!!
Mizuki Tsukiakari

7 Years Ago

Your welcome :)
It was sad, but it was also nice.



Posted 8 Years Ago


Wonderful Letdown

8 Years Ago

Thank-you!! I appreciate the feedback ^-^

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Added on April 2, 2013
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