Kiss me Goodnight

Kiss me Goodnight

A Poem by Christa Raelyn

One kiss and my heart is in flight.
I'm the damsel and you are my knight.
I'd run to you at any speed -climb any mountain to see you smile;
No matter the heights or the miles.
In your dark times, I'll be your light.
This love is similar to a fairytale.
My soul with you SAILS.
We are untameable- a flower that grows wild.
A rose with thorns yet so devine.
We are heaven and hell combined.

Always kiss me Goodnight my handsome knight..

© 2019 Christa Raelyn


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mmmmmmmmm like first love's innocence ... with a touch of reality "We are heaven and hell combined."
closing line contains a whole lot of wisdom ... i read in the Bible the advice in Ephesians 4:26 "Do not let the sun go down on our anger?" ... a fine path to follow especially in a committed relationship says i! nice poem ma'am!
E.


Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maxwell Ryder

2 Months Ago

I go to sleep mad all the time :(
Christa Raelyn

2 Months Ago

Don't do it.. Breath and Let it go
Maxwell Ryder

2 Months Ago

Can’t.Too stubborn. Makes the love spicier to keep it a week.



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A delightful romantic write confirmiing love come what may. Through good times and bad times. Constant and steady. Even the most beautiful of roses can have their share of thorns. Nicely done.

Chris

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Christa, I re-visited this piece, and still love it. You are a ‘romantic’ like me. When I write ‘love’ stories, I often fall in love with my protagonist🥴. -Ralph

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christa Raelyn

3 Weeks Ago

It makes me smile that you came back to re read it 😉
Ralph Proenza (Docralph)

3 Weeks Ago

I’ll be back😉😀
Christa Raelyn

3 Weeks Ago

Oook lol👑👑👑
Let me go ahead and be "that guy" for a moment or two. If you're looking for a "knight in shining armor", let me dispel that nasty notion: he doesn't exist. There is no perfect man out there, though you may devise one in your head. Trying to find your "knight" would be akin to trying to find air in space. The knightly men we see on TV are a mere fantasy. The dashing, strapping, brave, and handsome young knight? That's a child's fairytale. Fairytales don't hold up when reality kicks in. You will find that putting your faith in a "knight" will fail you whenever his armor starts to rust. If you put your faith in people, you're going to be very disappointed. If you search for the perfect "knightly" man, you're going to end up disappointed. And most girls that say they want a nice guy choose the bad boys anyway because the "knight" becomes boring and shallow. It's a dream and nothing more.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is sweeeeeet! 😀

Posted 2 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christa Raelyn

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks Frankie
heartfelt and emotionally driven. smooth flow on love's deep, up & down road. catchy title. we have to fight for love through thick & thin. it speaks to me of being in love no matter what comes against us. very much like this ... :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, wow...this spoke to me. If your 'Knight' really exists, he's very fortunate to have you in his life!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christa Raelyn

4 Months Ago

Oh. I'm sure he does. I just haven't met him yet 🤗
Christa Raelyn

4 Months Ago

Though this is how I felt with my ex at one point. When I actually wrote this. I realized it wasn't .. read more
I am old and I learn. Those kisses are never forgotten. Thank you Christa for sharing the amazing poetry for love. I could feel the need and the joy in the words.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christa Raelyn

4 Months Ago

Such is life. Love opens our eyes sometimes. But it can also blind you.
genocide

4 Months Ago

yeah love can blind you and that person can just wind up using you
Christa Raelyn

4 Months Ago

Yep... This is true
Love it, love is a battlefield.. “we are heaven and hell combined ! Great sentiment “always kiss me goodnight my knight. Never go to bed with resentment.


Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christa Raelyn

5 Months Ago

Thank you!!! 💕
a love poem to your knight in shining armor

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christa Raelyn

5 Months Ago

Something like that. He ended up my idiot in tin toil but that's beside the point! Hahw
genocide

4 Months Ago

ha ha now that's funny my dear
I love it. Deeply romantic!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christa Raelyn

5 Months Ago

Thank you. 😘
Lea Sheryn

5 Months Ago

You're welcome.

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