Did YOU love her?

Did YOU love her?

A Poem by Laconic Meraki

Did you REALLY love her?

Did you crave her presence in the same way that she longed for your attention when your mind was a million miles away?

Did you ever realize how much she needed to feel your touch, when you were nowhere to be found?

Did she light up your world, the way you did hers?
Tell me- is it dark without her around?

Did you ever get lost inside of her beauty,
Captivated by the way her eyes shined so bright?

Do you ever hear her still whisper to you that everything will be alright?
Do you miss her voice?
The secret language shared that only you two knew.
The conversation without making a sound.

She loved you. More than she loved life itself.
To see you smile, she would give her last breath.
You gave her a "forever" in such a short amount of time.
Never let your heart question if she loved you.

She loved you unconditionally. With every part of her heart and soul. She was hopelessly devoted to you.
From day one, until her death .

Keep her memories alive- Keep her spirit in your heart.
If you do, you will never be apart. True Love Never Dies.

© 2020 Laconic Meraki


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Was love share between the two of you??? This questioning is strong and true. Love has to go both ways in order for it to really work. Even if it was one-sided, never forget her love for you and what endless passion she has shown for you. Strong poem and well written. Fondly, Betty

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laconic Meraki

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind and wise words, Betty!
The love we had was a friendship that was real a.. read more
Betty Hermelee

3 Years Ago

sorry about your friend...stay safe



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One sided love can be a heart breaker, but love given is done so with much generosity on the part of the giver. Sometimes we don't appreciate that until a later time when we quietly reflect.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

He may very well have loved her. People grieve in different ways. The fact that he appears to have m.. read more
Laconic Meraki

3 Years Ago

This is understandable too.
Not everyone grieves the same for we are all different . Anythin.. read more
Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

You are welcome Christa :)
Was love share between the two of you??? This questioning is strong and true. Love has to go both ways in order for it to really work. Even if it was one-sided, never forget her love for you and what endless passion she has shown for you. Strong poem and well written. Fondly, Betty

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laconic Meraki

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind and wise words, Betty!
The love we had was a friendship that was real a.. read more
Betty Hermelee

3 Years Ago

sorry about your friend...stay safe
It's a beautiful poem. I like the simple language and straightforward wordings.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laconic Meraki

3 Years Ago

Thank you darling.
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