Perspective

Perspective

A Poem by Cadel
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A quick poem

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Life is spite and dreary,
If only allowed.
Life is bright and cheery,
If only allowed.
The world is matter slowly rotting,
If only allowed.
The world is soil ripe for potting,
If only allowed. 

© 2018 Cadel


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very witty. pessimistic/optimism perspective.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Your writing is very sparse and clear. I dig it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Of course, it all depends on our perspective, and what we see in the world around us is just a reflection of who we are. Nicely done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


and we are the ones who allow it to be what it will be...if only.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Short, sweet, yet so powerful.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lots of great points in this piece. Great job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perspective is a very interesting concept. Each of us views the world in a different way, and many of us try to express that viewpoint to other people. Who's to say which view, if any, is right? It's all just a matter of perspective.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Allowing" - Ah.. What a power it holds!
You've written the poem so elegantly!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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This crosses my mind a lot - perspective. It really dictates our life experience, but at times it's hard for us to be aware of that. If we were more regularly conscious of it, I think we'd probably enjoy life more.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Added on March 8, 2018
Last Updated on March 8, 2018
Tags: philosophy, psychology, life, poetry

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Cadel
Cadel

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