SAT: Sarah's Story Part 3

SAT: Sarah's Story Part 3

A Story by GeekyGamer128

My mother was a sweet woman before, my father went a-knocking on death's door. Then when he went on to be with the lord, all my mom ever did was mourn. All I want to do is make her proud. Maybe then she'd say I love you instead of a shout. This test to some is all a big joke. Better go focus before my mind fills with smoke. Don't lose your train of thought Sarah a lot depends on this. So instead of your mom yelling at you she'll give you a kiss. 

© 2016 GeekyGamer128


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GeekyGamer128
I'm only 11 but be honest. CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. :) XD

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Great wisdom in your words. Take two to have a fight and one to create path to calm and peace. Peace is hard work. We must try. Powerful short story. Left the reader with something to think about.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Just one thing, I see they are all named the same thing. Maybe adding "part one", and "part two", and so on, would be useful. I'm still enjoying Sarah's adventures so keep them coming!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 3, 2015
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GeekyGamer128
GeekyGamer128

Pennsauken, NJ



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I am an aspiring writer and scientist. I have always been a bookworm. I have been reading since age two. I've always loved to write. It is such a creative thoughtful process in which you create charac.. more..

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