hourglass

looking through the hourglass,

ive lost track of all the time thats past,

the sand has become every mistake i have ever made,

and it feels like forever.

you're no longer here,

proving all i had was fear,

and god it feels like forever,

without you being near.

i know its my fault,

it never is yours,

and now forever feels like home,

sitting all alone without you here.

im looking at you through broken glass,

now that no more time goes past,

my mistakes have run clear,

and never will we be forever anymore.

Reviews

[Lexi Villanueva]

Its like a song but its very good in many positive ways

[♪Barklight♪]

XD this sounds like a song ive heard, is it a parody??? O.o lol well anyways its great, keep up the good work
d^_^b

[Caitlynn Cusick]

it kinda is... i had it stuck in my head cuz i guess it pertains to the problems going on right now so i went with it... i cant remember for the life of me wat its called... something like
im looking at you through the glass,
dont know how much time has past,
but god it feels like forever,
and no one ever tells you that forever feels like home,
sitting all alone inside your head...

thats honestly all i can remember...

[♪Barklight♪]

XD yeah thats the one i was thinking of. I hope writing helps ·~·

[Caitlynn Cusick]

kinda... a little... not as much as it should though... thanks for the reviews