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A Poem by Caleb is typing...

Do I have to rhyme for it to make sense
Fit in your box for me to get prints
Follow all these rules just to get a few cents
Not just fit into this single row of houseplants?

Can't I just  de ete a letter or fall out of 
                                                            line
Add spaces    so that  it's  not  in  time
Sketch out a thought without it being fine,
Not perfect, I just want freedom to write

These thoughts on my mind are keeping me captive
What happened
When did I get entrapped in
Overthinking air that I breathe
Or words that I speak
I'm feeling like I am just asking

For trouble, it's troubling, all the things I have seen
Brokenness pain and all the anxiety
How can I feel so lost but then also freed
Searching, I don't know the words between A-Z

© 2021 Caleb is typing...


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Some great writer wrote. Organized poetry is boring. Un-organized thoughts on paper are masterpieces.
"Can't I just de ete a letter or fall out of
line
Add spaces so that it's not in time
Sketch out a thought without it being fine,
Not perfect, I just want freedom to write"
I did like the above lines my friend. I would tell you. Write what you feel. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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This write is amazing, funny, clever, and creative, and may I add, blunt. You didn't mention punctuations, but I got the point period (see what I did there and here

tyfs
I enjoyed this read.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Caleb is typing...

3 Months Ago

Ahaha I love the pun! It was fun to "sketch" out, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Hey this was pretty hip! I love it dude. Very smooth to read, and interesting to concept. Well imma head out but wanted to stop by and see ur poetry. Pretty epic if you ask me. Love it.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Caleb is typing...

3 Months Ago

Ahhhh I'm late to the reply but thank you for the kind words!!
This is a fun poem. Personally, all the reasons you listed are why I generally prefer to write prose over poetry. I like having more freedom to express myself.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Caleb is typing...

3 Months Ago

Same here! It’s hard sometimes to be restricted into rhyming or cadence when there’s so much to .. read more
I loved this! Especially the creativity that went into when writing the following:

Can't I just de ete a letter or fall out of
line
Add spaces so that it's not in time
Sketch out a thought without it being fine,
Not perfect, I just want freedom to write

A very relevant topic tbh, I understand your struggle and desperate need to express yourself. You have a wonderful way with words - great job!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Caleb is typing...

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much for the kind words!
Nix is typing...

3 Months Ago

Hehe, I'm glad you read some of his stuff Marija! I told you it was good! :) I'm soooo glad you agre.. read more
Some great writer wrote. Organized poetry is boring. Un-organized thoughts on paper are masterpieces.
"Can't I just de ete a letter or fall out of
line
Add spaces so that it's not in time
Sketch out a thought without it being fine,
Not perfect, I just want freedom to write"
I did like the above lines my friend. I would tell you. Write what you feel. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

THiS IS SOOOO GOOD BT!!! Five stars! I love how you can just spout out random poems like that!

Posted 3 Months Ago


so very creative and nicely written.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Caleb is typing...

3 Months Ago

Thank you!!
Just Kim

3 Months Ago

....not a problem.

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Added on January 11, 2021
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Caleb is typing...
Caleb is typing...

Indianapolis, IN



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I'm a 17-year-old who loves pizzarolls and writing. Join me on a journey through my written prose composed of "no one knows" more..

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