Is She Joking?

Is She Joking?

A Poem by Erica Daubert

My angel and my devil

(on either shoulder)

take nights off to get

drunk and play poker

so I can be a revelation

of guilt-free sarcasm

through written word

and half a laugh.

© 2015 Erica Daubert


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Dear Erica,

"My angel and my devil
(on either shoulder)"

A commonly used image, but you care this off since you personalize this and make these figure f angel and devil you own. The "take nights off", and "get / drunk and play poker".

Nicely done. Short. To the point. Nothing wasted. Enjoyed.

Very best regards,

Rick

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Your angel and your devil leave you free to wander at will...not so for most of us...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

May times I feel like my better judgement just leaves me too :P I loved the way this poem flows and the playfulness in it :) Great job with this one!

Posted 7 Years Ago


lol…love it. So cute and funny. Very artistic as well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pretty cool ... Nice write :))

Posted 7 Years Ago


nice poem....enjoyed this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sweet

Posted 7 Years Ago


i myself play poker,lol
nicely done..i loved it!!
Keep writing:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awesome poem i liked this:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rather amusing poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like the concept of this piece a lot, its very creative!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Erica Daubert
Erica Daubert

Philadelphia, PA



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Erica Daubert is a Philadelphia-area singer-songwriter, composer and multi-instrumentalist. Born and raised in South Jersey, she was heavily influenced by her grandfather, frontman and guitarist for .. more..

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