In My Mind

I can fly.

I soar over treetops in the night sky.

I float gracefully over moonlit rivers.

My feathers keep me warm.

I make friends with the owls of night,

and sing with the colorful birds of day.

I sing melodic, long forgotten songs,

and listen to tales of long forgotten lands.

I know the soul of the storm,

and the heart of the wind.

I am free.

Many adventures I've been on.

Many places I've traveled.

Many treasures I seek and find.

Everything is alive,

in my mind.

Reviews

[Bowers]

"Everything is alive in my mind"

wow, such power in a few words. This was a great write, I truly love the way it's laid out, you've got a wonderful way with words!

"I know the soul of the storm,
and the heart of the wind."

... seriously, I love these lines... to be honest it gave me a sense of romance, Im not sure if that was your intentions, but it was beautiful!

Again: GREAT WRITE!

[Calissa Knox]

I love this uplifting review! Thank you so much!

[Sibusiso Kotela]

"I know the soul of the storm..."
You've done it! So many feels in those few words.
You my dear... Are brilliant. Thank you for sharing!

[Jqjohnson]

This is one of the best poems I've read! Awesome!

[Calissa Knox]

Aww, thanks so much!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I am still alive by my heart and just so the world is not to long! White Feather with the rhythm of this poem you really rocks!

[Calissa Knox]

Thank you, Skyfall!

[Trace]

The minds eye can transport us to many wonderful adventures,
loved how this read and made me feel,

Trace

[Calissa Knox]

I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for reading!

[Eternal Poet]

I love your references to nature-the storm wind, owls, birds! Great work!

[Calissa Knox]

Thank you!

[Laura Harrison]

Dreams and imagination are wonderful. This is a beautiful and enchanting poem, a lovely read :)

[Calissa Knox]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[ayele marie dalmeida]

This is truly beautiful. we should always cherish our dream , they sometimes show us the right path to take :) thanks for sharing

[Calissa Knox]

Thanks for the encouragement, Ayele!

[ayele marie dalmeida]

Glad i read it, enjoyed it :)

[Michelle N. H.]

I love this, Feather. It is a stunning poem, articulately, vividly and emotionally. The mind is incredible, within everything's possible to perceive. These words are a treasure. Keep creating, keep writing beautifully :)

[Calissa Knox]

Thank you very much, Michelle! Such an encouraging review. :)

[Michelle N. H.]

You're very welcome :)

[Calissa Knox]

I can see you here as the eye (or I) of the storm... you whirl along with nothingness, and all together at one time, you observe, and catch beautiful things, and all is alive through your veins, and blood...
It's such an inspiration isn't it? if you can dream like this... this is a good poem, it has surreal asspects in it, but also the rich fantasy and reality mixed through your words... wonderful work dear Feather.

- Elisa

[Calissa Knox]

Yes, dreams are truly amazing. It's a gift to have a world of emotion, and freedom, and have this world, as well. Thank you very much for your kind words, Elisa! :)

Exactly, to combine the two is art, and a blessing in general :) Always always my pleasure dear :)