Isolation Senryu

Isolation Senryu

A Poem by Cambion

Were I a dead man,
Someone might notice the scent
Finally, a guest

© 2015 Cambion


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Cambion
孤独は冷たい火です

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when loneliness creeps in, you can feel invisible.. sometimes finding refuge in that isolation, other times just wishing anyone would notice.... they would see... in this case smell.. any attention--negative or otherwise is attention, right?... first piece I have read of yours and have to say, not only did you make me think, but I FELT it as well.. nicely done.. can't wait to read more:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cambion

9 Years Ago

I hope I can say you have good taste without suggesting that my work is anything but humble. Thanks .. read more
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

We can all "say" what we like, but usually, the work "speaks" for itself :)
you are more than .. read more



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when loneliness creeps in, you can feel invisible.. sometimes finding refuge in that isolation, other times just wishing anyone would notice.... they would see... in this case smell.. any attention--negative or otherwise is attention, right?... first piece I have read of yours and have to say, not only did you make me think, but I FELT it as well.. nicely done.. can't wait to read more:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cambion

9 Years Ago

I hope I can say you have good taste without suggesting that my work is anything but humble. Thanks .. read more
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

We can all "say" what we like, but usually, the work "speaks" for itself :)
you are more than .. read more
No doubt ..a very cool senryu..well done..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great words of wisdom here.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow!
This is powerfully emotive,
not easy to accomplish in such short work.
Well done!
-VM

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cambion

9 Years Ago

Kindness becomes you. Thanks for looking at my work.
Cool senryu... very nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cambion

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much.
Cool little Senryu sir...


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cambion

9 Years Ago

Thanks! Your kindness beautifies my comments page.
Matching Socks

9 Years Ago

I'm glad I could be of service. :)
Hah - thats class - I have a keen sense of smell thats why Im here mate - like a shark..lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cambion

9 Years Ago

I'm not sure what HP is in this context.
ANTO

9 Years Ago

HP is hello Poetry - but the reason I said sorry was for the comment about my kindness not beautifyi.. read more
Cambion

9 Years Ago

np bro, thanks for the link

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Added on December 27, 2014
Last Updated on January 2, 2015
Tags: poem, poetry, haiku, pain, heartbreak, love, death

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Cambion
Cambion

Amherst, MA



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