One Day

One Day

A Poem by Candi
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The mother part will be a long time from now! xD I was bored again.. It may be crappy

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One day I'll live my dream.
One day I'll lead my own team.
One day I'll help others.
One day I'll be a mother.
One day I'll be what I want.
One day I'll dream,
the next day I'll hope,
and other days I'll live the life I want to live.

© 2011 Candi


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It's not crappy, good job! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Thanks! I noticed I messed up.. will fix

Posted 9 Years Ago


well the whole thing is great . on the last line you could take out both the's . and it will sound better. and instead of sayin live life i want you could say live life the way i want.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Candi
Candi

Narnia., IN



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