Captivation

Captivation

A Poem by Jessica Auster

These thoughts captivate me

Just as the poacher

Captivates the snake.

Your eyes are a constant reminder

Of what's happened in the past year.

Walking through this lane has never been

So hard before, and it leaves me in tears

Quite often.

 

This red apple of sin

Doesn't bring me shame,

Nor foolishness.

It brings me to you...

Baby, let's never stop our sin.

© 2009 Jessica Auster


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oh nice! Very cool ending!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sinfully delicious...a lovely poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Like the twist with the Garden of Eden story.
All around enjoyable write!


Posted 10 Years Ago


this is deliciously evil....I love it :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


Deeply moving... the emotion is vivid and powerful, capturing us in each line... each phrase... Mesmerizing...

Posted 11 Years Ago


ooh...short, but very impressive. the power of infatuation and longing is very evident in your words--nothing extraneous or over-descriptive; it's simple imagery, and it works well.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 16, 2009

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Jessica Auster
Jessica Auster

EAST STROUDSBURG, PA



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