The Painter

The Painter

A Poem by Jessica Auster

If I were the painter,

You'd be my canvas....

And you would be my most

Brilliant work of art.

Your hues would be like no other,

And my favorite part would be the emerald green.

But in my home you would stay,

Because having to part would be awful.

An artist's first work of art

Is always their prized.

© 2009 Jessica Auster


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This is such a vivid, moving work of art. I love the painted aspects of love and tenderness expressed throughout. Brilliant!

Posted 11 Years Ago



Bravo!
At first, I was a little turned off by the seemingly cliche talk of how the person would be your best work, but then how you describe that you wouldn't let it out the house was just beautiful.
Original. A twist worthy of the name twist!!
Great write, enjoyed it.

Yours truly,
cloud6

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love how you use true "Artistic Words"
Are you a painter, I wouldn't be surprised if you were.
You show true awe, it's lovely.


Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a really nice piece of work in of it's self. *smile*
The thoughts are lovely and romantic.
Very very good.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Jessica Auster
Jessica Auster

EAST STROUDSBURG, PA



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A Poem by Jessica Auster