Red

Twenty words or less...

Thump, thump, pulse beats
Rhythm in my head
Feel of flesh 'tween teeth
And tangy Red
Intoxicating on my tongue...

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Rhythmically vampiric

Good read,

With love,

Matthew

[Rob Santana]

Still writing with excellent penmanship.

[Ellie Qtz]

Pretty great! The part where it was 'and tangy red', I had read the poem to fast for it to sound good though, but other than that it was amazing!