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Love Abounds

Love Abounds

A Poem by Carbon Muse
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To my dear Caira day, although I know you but for one piece of writing, I hope this brings you comfort in your time of grieving.

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When a heart breaks, an angel cries

and heaven touches down.

 

Like the autumn leaves,

whisked away by a gentle breeze,

before it can touch the ground.

 

Love is never lost or gone,

for in our hearts it stays.

 

Close to the surface,

it slumbers near,

to return another day.

 

Take heart in this, and note it well,

love in this world abound.

 

We live to love and die to share,

with those we lost in years gone by,

the life they were denied.

 

So listen well and heed these words,

your heart has room for more.

 

When the mourning is done

and a new life’s begun,

Love will find you … once more.

© 2015 Carbon Muse


Author's Note

Carbon Muse
I hope I did justice to this poem and that it serves to bring comfort to all those who has lost a loved one. It is the first poem I have done that has very little to no rhyme scheme and hopefully the flow and rhythm are not too awkward.

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I personally love poems without a rhyme scheme. That is the way I tend to write them anyway, but not always.

For some reason the lines, "So listen well and heed these words, your heart has room for more," socked me right in the feels.

Kudos

Posted 4 Years Ago


Carbon Muse

4 Years Ago

Thank you ^_^

I am trying to break my "perfectionist" ways and force myself to accept.. read more
Great write. Very well envisioned and displayed. Thanks for sharing!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Carbon Muse

4 Years Ago

Thanks! I'm glad I was able to bring it across clearly :)
Bohrium Guy

4 Years Ago

Your welcome!
Excellent

I have been there.

Christine Peters

Posted 4 Years Ago


Carbon Muse

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
This is a very touching poem! the words are direct and clear. Wisdom is shown in each and every line of this marvelous poem. Thank you for sharing.

Insight.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Carbon Muse

4 Years Ago

I'm glad it had an impact. I don't know so much about the wisdom, just experience... We all face s.. read more
Truly beautiful. I feel the sadness of a life lost, then the rejoice of a new life. I love the line "your heart has room for more." I feel it really conveys the theme of the poem. Great work all the way around!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Carbon Muse

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
The flow is fine and not awkward at all. Dont sweat the rhyme scheme, poetry isn't all about rhyming.
I love the line " we live to love and die to share"
It's an amazing testament to love !
bill

Posted 4 Years Ago


Carbon Muse

4 Years Ago

Thank you! I am so glad you loved it!
Simply Breathtaking! Well Written. Thanks for sharing and touching the hearts of others♥

Posted 4 Years Ago


Carbon Muse

4 Years Ago

You are very welcome, being able to write something that touches their heart, is the ultimate reward.. read more
maria  ( rose)

4 Years Ago

this is true !!!:)
This is a amazing poem. I have lost people and this is a perfect way to explain the pain and grieving process. Thank you so much for this amazing poem. I really hope you continue to write like this in the near future!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Carbon Muse

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much :) I hope so too, as it gives me a lot of joy and satisfaction :)
Thanks for a great poem and do not worry about rhymes because this poem is the real thing :) Excellently written, and I really enjoyed to read this one because your style is good and I really felt your thoughts in this one.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Carbon Muse

4 Years Ago

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it ^_^
I can relate to this. I have lost a lot of people in my life.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Carbon Muse

4 Years Ago

Glad it had an impact on you :)

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Added on November 3, 2015
Last Updated on November 3, 2015
Tags: Love, Death, Loss, Renewel

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Carbon Muse
Carbon Muse

South Africa



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