Vision of the Moon

Vision of the Moon

A Poem by Carley Hew

Looking at the moon on the way home from work tonight, a line suddenly came to mind "Have you taken a look at the moon tonight?"

Have you taken a glance at the moon tonight
Robust it hangs in the sky
Tonight I forget about the stars resting next to it
Tomorrow the sun just wont compare
It's beauty comes so naturally
And although blemished it may be
I have never seen something so perfect
Untouched by millions of human hands
A vision

© 2010 Carley Hew

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adore the innocent enraptured voice of the narrator~ comparisons are given extraordinary depth and make the core subject all the more brilliant~ much enjoyed! especially since I myself and quite fond of the lunar beauty~

Posted 12 Years Ago

First...Lol at the pic...
Hurm, I never thought that moon could be that pretty...
In fact I never though moon was pretty at all...

Good imagination you go there...

Posted 12 Years Ago

I realled liked how you said "tomorrow the sun just wont compare" that gave something to think about. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

'Robust' is an unusual and very effective way to describe the moon. I really enjoyed reading this.


Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on August 27, 2010
Last Updated on August 27, 2010


Carley Hew
Carley Hew

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