Ecstasy

Ecstasy

A Poem by Carol Phelan Aebby

                           "Ecstasy"



A fresh breeze caress of life’s secrets whispers

As the fog clears and colors appear, I sense;

And wishes of sensual waves I have...


I wish I could feel your bare chest on mine,

Wake up in your arms to enjoy the magic 

Of your love's charms, as the sun shines on us.


I wish I could be dawn to dusk, dusk to dawn,

Melting into you as one; where I belong,

Making waves of joy on the ocean of love...


I wish, I wish... I wish for all I know to be bliss,

Sighing to your soul as you embrace me tight

And we dance the beauty of our lives now... 




© - Carol Phelan Aebby 

© 2015 Carol Phelan Aebby


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Ah, Carol, your heart so lovely has penned an exquisitely beautiful romantic piece that communicates perfectly that longing to be with the one we love--an emotion that every human being can relate to as it shouts to the heavens that we are inadequately incomplete unless, and until, we are in the arms of that special one that makes this life sweet ...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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Beautiful and hopeful words. Hope, wishes and dreams. Must be attempted.
"I wish, I wish... I wish for all I know to be bliss,
Sighing to your soul as you embrace me tight
And we dance the beauty of our lives now... "
I liked the above lines. Ecstasy. Needed place for us to find and embrace. Thank you Carol for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote





Posted 6 Years Ago


two people in love,melting together as one,the bliss of life,what god created us to be,happy

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah, Carol, your heart so lovely has penned an exquisitely beautiful romantic piece that communicates perfectly that longing to be with the one we love--an emotion that every human being can relate to as it shouts to the heavens that we are inadequately incomplete unless, and until, we are in the arms of that special one that makes this life sweet ...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ecstasy, likes this is a bless of God and life. Real love mark the skin and soul as well. Wonderful beauty fragment of pure love words. Thanks for share your wonderful talent.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a magical, sensual, and intimate flowing piece of pure poetry.
I felt the emotions, crystal clear. Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


A very loving and intimate piece Carol. The emotions you described are something that every relationship desires and hopes it lasts for a while longer than the early phases.
Great work, thanks for sharing it :) cheers

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carol Phelan Aebby

9 Years Ago

Thank you Poet!

Wishing you creativity and bliss!
Carol Phelan Aebby
a soft wish of evermore...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carol Phelan Aebby

9 Years Ago

Thank you Poet!

Your gentle words are treasured.

Carol Phelan Aebby
I wish I could feel your bare chest on mine,
Wake up in your arms to enjoy the magic
Of your love's charms, as the sun shines on us.

One of my best days lines.
Beautifully imagined and purely done friend.
Love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carol Phelan Aebby

9 Years Ago

Thank you Poet!

Your words are treasured.

With respect and smiles,
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Added on February 13, 2015
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Tags: Ecstasy, love, romance

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Carol Phelan Aebby
Carol Phelan Aebby

Cork, Ireland



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