~  Soul  ~

~ Soul ~

A Poem by Carola

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I believe more to life and death than we know.
"Am I a new soul or an old resurrected soul, a question often comes to mind."
In my dreams. I see other places and other lives. I do believe in karma. Good life lead to good places and bad life lead to three-fold payment a-coming. Thank you Carola for sharing the excellent poetry. I like poetry that ask questions.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You've sure set my mind a'wondering. I feel I have a soul, that is, I have something inside that's not flesh, but alive. Like so much about the universe, I've always just accepted the idea that we have eternal "spirits".
Agreeing with Coyote, I believe there is more to life and death than we know. And your question about whether a soul may be old or new, I'd sure like to know. Is it possible that God lets some of us come back for another try, thus producing an "old soul"?

Posted 3 Years Ago


Mind body and 'soul'. These three work in unison - I believe, but along the way I have learned to seperate the three. Very often we quote," I love you with all my heart and soul!" I feel we should give away, if we like, everything but cling steadfastly to our soul. All is lost if we give that away - you then 'belong' to the recipient! Secon review but I feel this needed to be said.

Posted 5 Years Ago


beautifully said ... deep, meditative and honest ... its the "Great I Am" eh!? consciousness ... your poem is so inspiring to me ... i love all the interweavings it brings to mind ... the soul, brain, heart and essence .. when i took required science courses in college we studied Carbon Science in which all matter can be reduced to Carbon .. other sciences had of course brought it even closer to that one particle of energy that bursts into Light ... my opinion? love your use of language and free verse ... inspired in a powerful way .. meditative .. beautiful truths in living and thinking ...
E.
ps. i don't think we go around more that once ... its plenty enough as it is ;)))))))))))))))

Posted 5 Years Ago


I believe more to life and death than we know.
"Am I a new soul or an old resurrected soul, a question often comes to mind."
In my dreams. I see other places and other lives. I do believe in karma. Good life lead to good places and bad life lead to three-fold payment a-coming. Thank you Carola for sharing the excellent poetry. I like poetry that ask questions.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thank you roxanne, erika and kitty for stopping by to read and posting your kind comments

Posted 6 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this piece of poetry and thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed this. The rhythm that I got from this was almost like a dance, or even moving from wave to wave. Very well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brilliant. Hold on to your soul I say. It is the reason for your existence/ your being. Don't give it away as you'll be 'done' then. I have often kept it close to heart and mind.Thanks for sharing these words .

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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