~  Seconds Of  Time  ~

~ Seconds Of Time ~

A Poem by Carola

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This is truly the most unusual discussion around end-of-life questioning! The narrator could be questioning him/herself or another. Seemingly questions are not pondered in a judgmental way, but then at the end, the reference to pass/fail grading also seems to be a judgemental assessment . . . not saying what's acceptable, but just referring to the idea that some lives are acceptable & some are not. I'm not sure I can relate to this part of your message, but I love seeing a fresh way of questioning life, with some heavy-duty concepts to explore! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carola

1 Year Ago

hi margie thanks for reviewing.
my intention was for people to look at their own life's perfo.. read more



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Life is so short, This is a wonderful write, one to ponder on. Nicely written

Posted 1 Year Ago


Carola

1 Year Ago

thanks for stopping to read & comment
This is truly the most unusual discussion around end-of-life questioning! The narrator could be questioning him/herself or another. Seemingly questions are not pondered in a judgmental way, but then at the end, the reference to pass/fail grading also seems to be a judgemental assessment . . . not saying what's acceptable, but just referring to the idea that some lives are acceptable & some are not. I'm not sure I can relate to this part of your message, but I love seeing a fresh way of questioning life, with some heavy-duty concepts to explore! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carola

1 Year Ago

hi margie thanks for reviewing.
my intention was for people to look at their own life's perfo.. read more
OOOOOooooooooo... this one has not too hidden teeth. Thar be truth in them thar words... and tears too.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carola

1 Year Ago

yes i'm sure some people will rue some of their life decisions, the impulsive & thoughtless ones.read more
If we followed our conscience and our heart to the best, then we may have no regrets. We can only live the best we can, and we learn from our mistakes and get better for them.
Each individual can read this poem and identify, absolutely.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carola

1 Year Ago

very true living the the best you can.
but i see youngsters making poor & impulsive life cho.. read more
Very beautiful poem. Life doesn't give us much time to do the things we want.

When I escaped my own country, it wasn't planned. I wanted to live like the other people.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Carola

1 Year Ago

hello junglee, thanks for reviewing my poem. yes life can be short.

did you manage t.. read more
JungLee

1 Year Ago

I did look around but I've been busy taking care of my baby to write a letter.

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Added on March 9, 2020
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Tags: choices, image, time, seconds, life

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Carola
Carola

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