~ Clouds ~

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Carola, this is an awesome poem. You have really excelled here. I love the imagery of riders in the sky. I love to cloud gaze and watch all the shapes morph. You have such imagination here, right down to the last stanza when you wake with a thud after falling out of your hammock. Wonderful composition.

Chris

[Carola]

thanks for stopping by to read & review chris.

[Samuel Dickens]

Thank goodness you only fell from a hammock! Considering what you used to do for a living, I imagined you were quite a lot higher. I share your fascination with clouds, and enjoyed this misty, pillowy romp.

[Carola]

hi samuel, yes i love looking at all the amazing shapes of clouds. thanks for stopping by to comment.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

How wonderful. I enjoyed your poem. "I've looked at clouds from both sides now, the good and bad and still, somehow, it's clouds illusions I recall, I really don't know clouds at all." Joni Mitchell

[Carola]

pleased you enjoyed my poem fabian & thanks for your comment.

[KAREN]

This has great imagery! I love to look at the clouds and pretend they are something else.

[Carola]

thanks for stopping by to read & comment karen
cheerio carola

[KAREN]

You're welcome!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was just simply beautiful and fun to read! Laying out looking up at the puffy white clouds daydreaming!

[Carola]

thank you for stopping by to comment kathy
cheerio carola

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

My pleasure!

[Patricia]

this is terrific as everyone could relate to this beautiful write. so relaxing and surreal feel and I love that feeling. Lovely!

[Carola]

thanks patricia.

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved the poetry dear Carola. To get lost in the clouds. I did a few times. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Carola]

thank you coyote for stopping by to read & review.
cheerio carola

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Carola and you are welcome.

[barleygirl]

Yes, my friend, I also imagine being among clouds . . . often! Why not? We've fouled the earth so let's escape & leave it to those who are unable to soar in imagination like we do! Thank you for taking me on a flight of fancy with fun original details (((HUGS)))

[Carola]

hello margie, you're welcome!
thanks again for your time to read & review.
cheerio carola

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Well, you have mirrored what I have often dreamed of doing. Now I don't have to because you gave such a visual and tactile journey to us, I feel have done it.
And I even felt the thud at the end....my head hurts a little, but it was worth it.
Quite the write, Carola,
j.

[Carola]

hahaha! ...sorry your head hurts
thanks jacob for taking the time to read & your kind review.
cheerio carola