Falling Up

Falling Up

A Poem by Rave
"

have no idea just felt like falling up

"

Will you pull me down from this crystalline sky if I tell you it makes me want to cry? Will you hold me down and find the gravity? Or will you float around in the sky with my holding my hand then setting me free?

Leave me be

I'm just happy

Set me free

Oh don't trap me

Gravity gave up

You promised you wouldn't

Join me in falling up

As the others fall down

We fly high

No way they can get us now

We'll just go up forever

As long as I have you I can keep myself together

Now lets fly past forever

© 2009 Rave


Author's Note

Rave
i dont know
explain this to me
what does it mean? can u find a meaning i couldn't?

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Taylor it is truly amazing and i dont hate you i really dont, but i want to be friends and i cant be a good friend when my life was ruined, but your wrighting has made me think twice about life and the way it has been written is amazing

hope we can be friends


Posted 15 Years Ago


Your title caught my attention. It seems like the character is asking will you hold me down? Gravity gave up on me, suggesting some other force was holding the character down, but finally gave up because the spirit was free and floating. It seems too, that the character was asking are you strong enough to hold me down if I asked you to? Are you going to join others in holding me down? But truly, I do not want to be held down, so join me, fall up with me and lets be happy together.

Hmmm.. made me think for your review. :p lol

Great job...

Posted 15 Years Ago



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