Tell me Everything

Tell me Everything

A Poem by forfila

We danced love down from the stars
The chorus played a tune from afar
No sin in our touch, we loved from the hearts
The hearts loved from the father above
Seeds of phoenix sown into the dark
In time the fruit will find its righteous path
I ask you to trust me, I ask you to enjoy this dance
When we get to the end and the sun sets into dark
Then we will see the light of the thousand stars
I never wish to bring you any harm
Just come along with me and tell me everything about who you are.

© 2008 forfila


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Wow. I was mixed with emotion when I read this over. I felt for you, the author, because I've felt like I've wanted someone to just come with me and not speak a word, and just come along. I also felt anxious to find out if the girl goes for the dance..All else aside, very well written. I enjoyed this poem very much!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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So often we forget what love truely is, and this piece is a good reminder of its true meaning.

Innocent, trusting, sweet, a hint of the sensual, and above all HONEST...

Everyone who loves should love like the lovers in this particular piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A beautiful, charming, and slightly seductive piece that is full of warmth and honesty. A deeply romantic poem that carried me away, into the stars, which is very hard to do.

Brava!

Posted 13 Years Ago


We danced love down from the stars
The chorus played a tune from afar
No sin in our touch, we loved from the hearts
The hearts loved from the father above

Oh what lovely poetic verse ~This piece truly is Divine and Inspirational
Beautifully penned and wonderfully expressed!!~ Matthew~ Fran Marie

Posted 13 Years Ago


a very beautiful write, matthew....i felt it deep in my heart and rejoiced in the dance. you always write with such passion that you sweep us all away with you. i just love this. >:D<


T a,

Amanda @};--

Posted 13 Years Ago


Matt, this is truly amazing. I'm not even sure how to respond to the magnitude of its beauty, and I consider myself a writer! lol

Seriously, these are words inspired from above... its depth and beauty beyond measure. Thank you for sharing this... and all of its inspiration and magnificence!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Matt my friend, my friend, I love your sweet sweet words.
x

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. I was mixed with emotion when I read this over. I felt for you, the author, because I've felt like I've wanted someone to just come with me and not speak a word, and just come along. I also felt anxious to find out if the girl goes for the dance..All else aside, very well written. I enjoyed this poem very much!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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