Golden

Golden

A Poem by Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)
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In a world so full of tears and sounds, what will it take to turn Silence into gold?

"

silence is golden

when voices are silver

and sorrow is blue

© 2014 Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)


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The softness of the colors and sighs... how you lift the darkness from our minds... our backs... We have all cried more than enough tears... may we find this golden world so bright.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
WOW! this is powerful wording that has such truth! Excellent Job

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

7 Years Ago

Thanks! It's great to see you back :)
imagination101

7 Years Ago

Good to be back, and you are welcome!
NICE! Thought provoking!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

7 Years Ago

Thanks! It's great to see you back :)
storiestotell

7 Years Ago

You're welcome, glad to be back!
Part of me feels like this is something my old priest would say to me before slapping me, and another part of me feels like this is "Smack and Wisdom" aka common sense, but i have never witnessed it in such a way.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

7 Years Ago

thanks for your insight
fine, haiku-like short poem, excellent..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

7 Years Ago

thank you!
Such a powerful statement in short verse... Concise and
beautifully penned!~xoxo~:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

7 Years Ago

thank you xx
Brilliant in its brevity...you've expressed so much in few words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

7 Years Ago

thank you!
Great Senryu. ......................

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

7 Years Ago

thank you!
love this...great use of color and brevity....such power in these lines.
better sometimes to keep things to ourselves...spoken thoughts can sometimes really hurt, and cause that blue.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

7 Years Ago

thank you!

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