Rain

Rain

A Poem by Heromen Selena
"

It was raining earlier so I thought I would write about it.

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Drip Drip Drip of a rain drop
Plop Plop Plop on my face
Puddles everywhere
On the cobble stone

Squish Squish Squish as I walk
Splash Splash Splash on my legs
Water coating everything
Purging my heart

I breathe out just to see steam
Come from my chapped lips
Feel God's tear drops
On my skin

© 2012 Heromen Selena


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Heromen Selena
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the requim of a refreshing sense newness, the play on wording is vibrant
and draws the poem to an artisitc realm of expression, emotive and creative.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Heromen Selena

4 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Beautifully written. Just an amazing write! I enjoyed the concept and your use of rain/tears.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Heromen Selena

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review :)
It's simple, yet absolutely amazing! Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heromen Selena

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I loved this! It was so surreal. It put a perfect picture in your head from the description. I loved the word choice you used also.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heromen Selena

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your helpful feedback!
Beautiful!!!!! I love the use of raion as a cleansing tool instead of just a symbol for sorrow!! I love this!!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heromen Selena

4 Years Ago

Thank you! The funny thing is that I really don't like the rain now a couple years later :P Amazing .. read more
Elizabeth Porterfield

4 Years Ago

Lol:) yeah it is
I enjoyed reading this. Lightly written and beautiful :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heromen Selena

4 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Very well written.....I enjoyed.....Whisk

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heromen Selena

4 Years Ago

Thank you.
NOT BAD...LITE AND FAST...YOU SURVIVED IT..IT SEEMS :)


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heromen Selena

4 Years Ago

Haha I'm not really sure what that means but thank you for reading :)
Lovely write , something about rain cleansing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heromen Selena

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Heromen Selena
Heromen Selena

Somewhere Over the Rainbow, NH



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