So beautiful

Old poetry. Good dreams.

So Beautiful
                                     (Written 6 April 1980)
 
As beautiful  as a early morning sunrise.
 
As bright as a full moon that light up a cloudless night.
 
As soft as a gentle summer breeze that caress our  skin and face.
 
Your beautiful face and smile make me come alive.
 
With each moment we fall together.
 
Is my reason to desire life and love.
 
You, my dream maker.
 
My lady,  my joy and reason to keep hope  alive and strong.
 
Please stay with me.
 
I love you with an open heart.
 
I don't want to control you.
 
For you to understand.
 
I need you in my life.
 
A lover, friend or what you desire.
 
Hold my hand.
 
Walk on the lonely beach.
 
let the days and night come and go.
 
Let's our love grow.
 
With the understanding . Love doesn't cage. It grow and become sweeter.
 
My wish is to see your beautiful face every morning.
 
To kiss and hold you.
 
To whisper I love you my beautiful lady.
       
                       Coyote
         (Very old. Reading old books from the past. This one jumps out)
 
 
 

Author's Note

A old poem. Please assist if had errors. Never too old to learn.

Reviews

[Chris Newman]

This poem has strength of integrity of the poet. It is a beautiful lovely love poem. Therefore I have to say although it is an old poem by age it is also a young poem that expresses love. I would say leave the poem as is. I didn't notice any errors and it is so positive.
from Chris Newman

[Neshy]

Well done

[Kitty Davies]

Beautiful! I only see one error which in the line "let the days and night come and go.", you did not capitalize the first L.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"My wish is to see your beautiful face every morning.
To kiss and hold you.
To whisper I love you my beautiful lady."

I adore these lines- it's such a sweet and selfless wish.

"You, my dream maker."
This line touched me too- it's quite mystical, and shows you could even connect with your lover when she wasn't with you physically as well.

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hmm an old write, very well written indeed. Makes me think a bit about what I have
here in front of me. Nicely presented.

[Arabdha]

a lucid,lovely confession-loved it

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love is suppose to be selfless so that means doing for each other cause we want to not expected to. Glad you shared this poem from the vaults.

[quinfinn]

this is breathtaking in its beauty and affection. i love every line in this heartfelt and searching write. if your old writes are this gorgeous, i wish you would pull more of them from your repertoire.....awesome.

[Valentine]

Very correct...love does not cage..I liked this one very much..Katihe