Her red dress

Her red dress

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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I needed to write a poem about a woman in a red dress who stole my hearts many moons ago.

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                          Her red dress

Lady elegance with hair of auburn brown. She waited by her window.  She wished on the first star and the moon. To feel needed and wanted. She is lady sad and lonely. She had spent too much time alone in the house.

Once she was lady love. She wanted to be wild and wanted to dance, drink and sing. Sweet kisses of regret had become kisses missed and wished for in the dust of the closing night.

Deny kisses and long embraces are remembered by a careless man. He remembered his love dancing in her red dress. Her shoulders bare and her long legs barely hidden by the soft material of her red dress. He called her and he told her.

My sweet love, put on your red shoes and your red dress. Tonight we drink, dance and find some laughter. I want you ready to celebrate the night. You are my salvation and joy. I love and die in your eyes of joy or sadness. Tonight we will dance and find the places we forgot. We will leave behind the useless places and life.

Lady sweet and forgiving. She allowed her tears to fall. She wanted to feel needed and alive. Her prayers were answered. She found her red dress and held her red shoes. She whispered quietly.  Thank you kind Gods of the night and love for allowing me to be content.

                               Coyote/John Castellenas


© 2014 Coyote Poetry


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Beautifully penned and so much Emotion and love and romance.


Thank you for this lovely piece
and thank you for your kind reviews and comments
you on my page.

Lady elegance with hair of auburn brown. She waited by her window. She wished on the first star and the moon. To feel needed and wanted. She is lady sad and lonely. She had spent too much time alone in the house.


you always paint such beautiful Romance
my poet friend.

Blessings. Kindred poet



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Thank you Kindred poet. I appreciate your comment and kind words..
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

6 Years Ago

It's a pleasure my Poet friend. You're very welcome. Blessings. Kindred poet


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I love how your poetry flows in flawless narrative. Your descriptions are so vivid and it was poetic justice that lady sad and lonely was able to transform into lady sweet and forgiving. Great work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and the positive comment. I do appreciate.
Ashira Macy

6 Years Ago

It was my great pleasure!
You paint such a vivid picture hon. Reading you is to see and feel, your words bring visions...always beautifully delivered x

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Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Real life teaches us. If we don't appreciate the people in our life. We can lose them. Thank you for.. read more
Ruth

6 Years Ago

So very true...always welcome hon x
Beautifully penned and so much Emotion and love and romance.


Thank you for this lovely piece
and thank you for your kind reviews and comments
you on my page.

Lady elegance with hair of auburn brown. She waited by her window. She wished on the first star and the moon. To feel needed and wanted. She is lady sad and lonely. She had spent too much time alone in the house.


you always paint such beautiful Romance
my poet friend.

Blessings. Kindred poet



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Thank you Kindred poet. I appreciate your comment and kind words..
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

6 Years Ago

It's a pleasure my Poet friend. You're very welcome. Blessings. Kindred poet
Awesome poem! It really is sometimes taken for granted just how much kind words can mean everything in the world coming from the right person. I love how the sadness is the poem dissipated into happiness, warmth and love! Good job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Thank you Eliana. I appreciate the comment.
A lyrical and gentle piece, hints of sadness as well as love, and tenderness. Thanks John, for this lovingly put together poem.
Rosa
-x-

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Thank you Rosalind for reading and the comment.
Rosalind Gale

6 Years Ago

You are welcome, always. It is pleasant to drop back in here from time to time and read some of my f.. read more
Very nice image. Easily conjured by the reader due to your smooth eloquence. Romantic and tragic and nostalgic.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the positive comment. I do appreciate.
Oh my, every time I come back to you, my hard heart melts. I love your work so much, it transports me. It is soft and loving, and warm, like a cozy blanket to revisit. Oh, listen to me gush, people are going to think -- oh, never mind, what a great poem. One minor thing, at the beginning, she had spent or just spent in place of she had spend ... Once again, outstanding, moving poetry.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the help and reading. I do appreciate.
Lyn Anderson

6 Years Ago

It is honestly my pleasure to read your work, and help when I can. Your work is enjoyable.
That was beautiful. So emotional. Must be a wonderful experience in your life, John. Your descriptions are very vivid and I can totally imagine everything while reading this. A wonderfully crafted piece with pure emotions portrayed into words and remnants of exquisite memories.

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Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Thank you Thrinna. If we forget to pay attention to the people we love. We can break their heart and.. read more
wonderful..I definitely feel your emotions pressing hard through every line and verse. You always put your heart into your pieces

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Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Thank you John. I appreciate the comment.
A great piece packed with so much meaning. A great read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and the comment.

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