I need a wild heart

Just words

      


                                  I need a wild heart



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                       Love made me live

Beautiful woman told me. We need to bathe in the quiet and sweetness of love.
Love come when love wants.
The movement of love is like a song.
The rhythmically song take us to interlacing of hands, mouth and body.
Let's dance  nude upon the balcony and allow our love story to be whispered to the stars and the moon.

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                              Your flesh remembered you

Old man Winter had made us escape to the dark rooms where lovers celebrate the night.
You teased me. Dancing nude to the Leonard Cohen songs and you fell to bend knees and
with beautiful face near. You whispered. "Your flesh remembered me and I will always remember you.
I wrapped my arms around you and I wish to drift forever into your eyes.
I told you. Love demands payment. I know my payment is loving and needing you till my last breathe.
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Author's Note

Just words

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Coyote, you know I adore your writing, as do most the other writers here who interact with you. I understand you do not want to start things by blocking people and taking their reviews down, but I don't think you should feel obligated to leave up rude reviews, especially when the person made sure it was long enough to stick as a featured review. Shameful. People may have their own opinions, but your work feels real and from the heart, and the style and simplicity are what makes it appealing. Anyone who doesn't see that is narrow minded and too rigid to see beauty in something that is not similar to what they themselves believe to be superior writing. Insults of other writers are not called for on this site. If you don't like something, just pass it by with grace and tact, and if you have true, constructive suggestions to help another writer, then do it quietly, and if necessary, behind the scenes.

[V]

I do abs agree with you. I have blocked this writer because of his weird and unkind review replies. We all have different styles and tastes, it's ok when one points out things to be changed that seem to be sort of disturbing or whatever about piece but I'd never put anyone down like this. If one doesn't like one's writings for any reasons, they should just stay away from it. I wouldn't even bother to leave a comment or review on writes I dislike.

[Lyn Anderson]

Exactly. There is no need to belittle others in this manner. It is hurtful and highly uncalled for. Read what you like, and review in a constructive way. It is not helpful to speak in general terms and call people down.

[V]

Yes, definitely.

[emmajoy]

No, John.. not 'just words'. These two stanzas are a man's thoughts of a permanent love, a searched for and blissful love. Your final line is a prayer.. and those last three words.. the Amen.

Beautifully put and memorable.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you emmajoy for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[hcarson]

you know when jazzhands up top likes something and gets jealous because he starts putting it down and ripping into it..what an odd creature he is..coyote, this was lovely, and the video brillient..block him, dont let him spew venom on your work,it isnt constructive, its spiteful envy.

[hcarson]

lovely, welll written, sounds so sincere. i like :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the nice comment.

[PoeticChico]

Just wonderful and beautifully written poetry.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Alex for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[hardeep sabharwal]

very beautifully expressed the feelings here, amazing write

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Hardeep. I appreciate the comment.

[Randhir kaur]

These have touched my soul Coyote..Amazingly expresed..Its not just words its the language of pure soul..Thumbs up..!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Randhir. I appreciate the kind words.