The pureness of my reflection

The pureness of my reflection

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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                           The pureness of my reflection

Once we had the moon, the sun and the free road.
You were my footprints into wild waters and secret places upon mountain where the clouds
danced with us.

Together we fell into the carousel of wild sea.
Suicide boarding the California Winter storm than
healing body and soul together in deep thoughts and tender embrace into deep nights.

We invented new places and journey. Free-climbing high into private hills and mountains.
I remember you dancing nude by the secret waterfalls. You blessed my vision and the sun.

Today you have become my moon, my sun and my wild river.
The pureness of my reflection take me to you in sweet dreams.

I remember your short t-sheets and your commands for long massages.
You were my perfect beauty who sang songs of love to me by the Monterey sea.
I have ascended to old age and I still whisper your name in the quiet of the night.

I love you Gail. I hope you are safe and still seeking the beauty of this world.

                            John Castellenas/Coyote





© 2016 Coyote Poetry


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Coyote Poetry
Just words.

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This is no poem. This is love. I love the way how you fill the words with sympathy and compassion because genuinely, we feel it, too. You write it as if you're serenading us to the place itself and allowing us to become witnesses of the love you had with Gail along with the moon, the stars and the free road. Nice piece, Sir Coyote!

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.



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words that bring a tear to the eye. just says everything. touching and being touched. captured it!

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.
Oh to love this much it's consuming! Beautifully romantic
This work is definitely a favourite.



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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.
Beautiful and lasting memories.. she probably shares them too wherever she is.

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you Stella. Old memories become gold with time.
Stella Armour

4 Years Ago

They do John.. very precious..
John this was very romantic:) You did an awesome job expressing all. But you always did that!

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the comment.
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4 Years Ago

Your welcome John
This is so romantic and tender, so lovely.
"Footprints into wild waters". I really liked that.
This sounds like a very special lady, and very lucky to be remembered so fondly.
Beautiful writing.


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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you Ana. I appreciate the comment.
"You were my footprints into wild waters and secret places upon mountain where the clouds
danced with us."

such sweet devotion depicted in this sentence. once again, a charming, romantic write.

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and the comment my friend. I do appreciate.
This is one of my new favorites of yours, that I've read so far. I really love the way you've mentioned almost everything I used to adore about being young & carefree & sexually uninhibited & embracing every sensory adventure I could. Details make writing rich & yours is a sparkling mountain of gold & diamonds, especially in this poem. Even tho your poem speaks to a certain person, Gail . . . in my case I could be speaking to my own younger self, who has all but disappeared thru the hardships of life. That's why the title really beckons to me in this interpretation.

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for reading and the kind words. I told my kids. Travel, test life and have fun .. read more
to still have this much love for someone from the past...says a lot about the speaker of this poem...
enchanting write.

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob. I appreciate the comment.
I can see her so well, your visuals lend to pristine clarity :) A softly, romantic prose that captures the heart and emotions :)

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Ruth

4 Years Ago

Always my pleasure hon :)
nothing more inspiring than the mind of a woman you love, reflected on her body..
thank you for sharing! this was sexy to say the least.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

I agree and thank you for reading.
Desert Rose

4 Years Ago

Most Welcome.

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