The pureness of my reflection

The pureness of my reflection

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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                           The pureness of my reflection

Once we had the moon, the sun and the free road.
You were my footprints into wild waters and secret places upon mountain where the clouds
danced with us.

Together we fell into the carousel of wild sea.
Suicide boarding the California Winter storm than
healing body and soul together in deep thoughts and tender embrace into deep nights.

We invented new places and journey. Free-climbing high into private hills and mountains.
I remember you dancing nude by the secret waterfalls. You blessed my vision and the sun.

Today you have become my moon, my sun and my wild river.
The pureness of my reflection take me to you in sweet dreams.

I remember your short t-sheets and your commands for long massages.
You were my perfect beauty who sang songs of love to me by the Monterey sea.
I have ascended to old age and I still whisper your name in the quiet of the night.

I love you Gail. I hope you are safe and still seeking the beauty of this world.

                            John Castellenas/Coyote





© 2016 Coyote Poetry


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Coyote Poetry
Just words.

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This is no poem. This is love. I love the way how you fill the words with sympathy and compassion because genuinely, we feel it, too. You write it as if you're serenading us to the place itself and allowing us to become witnesses of the love you had with Gail along with the moon, the stars and the free road. Nice piece, Sir Coyote!

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.



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Love the romantic imagery you draw of her!
Delightful.

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you Sarah. I appreciate the comment.
This is very beautiful. such poise and grace in the language you used. and fantastic imagery, well done!

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you Rebecca. I appreciate the comment.
😍 There are those certain ones who torch our lives, melt our hearts and forever live inside our memories forevermore...

...I can personally relate.

Beautifully penned, you😃😃

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you Alisa. I appreciate the comment.
A beautiful remembrance and safe keeping for one who has passed though another's life like a shaft of light:)

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you Pryde. Old memories become our true gold with time and distance.
dear John, escapades of dancing by waterfalls
capturing dreams of romance by wild water... of
a beautiful lover... climbing mountains... reaching
for the moon. Beautiful poetry. Truly, Pat

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you Pat. We need the beauty of nature to make life perfect.
You must have loved her a lot to still remember clearly all the memories....hope she gets to read this :) .....breathtakingly beautiful painting u have made of her and your trip to wildness .. enjoyed reading it

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you Ria. I appreciate the comment.
A beauty who likes massages and short tee shirts.....I can picture her because your imagery is so wonderful. If you remember her so many years later, she must have been a special lady. "Today you have become my moon, my sun and my wild river." Ultra romantic words!! Wonderful work, John. Lydi**

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you Lydia. I appreciate the comment.
Lovely write and wonderful memories.

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you Moon for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Those visions at night must be so hauntingly beautiful. You have loved so fully that you will never lack for the glowing memories to fill your night's...so beautifully written sir. Please accept my compliments on this writing.

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you Divya. I appreciate the comment.
This is so beautiful! Gentle, romantic, nostalgic, and bittersweet. It reminds me of times long ago when I knew waterfalls and wild rivers. Thank you for sharing this.

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Still time to find waterfalls and the sea. Thank you for reading and the comment.

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