The brown eyes girl

Just words.

The brown eyes girl

Was a lonely beach,

late Spring brought out the lovers of the sea.

I saw near the moving and dancing Pacific.

A woman and child.

I fell in love with the brown eyes woman,

her lips of sweet honey and 

her smile that could  light-up the darkest of days.

She danced with the sea and

she sang lullabies to  her baby.

Making me jealous of her gentle embrace and 

the love for the child.

She pay no attention to me.

I was just a admirer of her beauty.

I watched her feet touch the cold waves,

making a silence wish to know the beautiful woman.

I know life is never fair,

beautiful woman are distance dreams for me now.

I was a lucky observer,

making wishes and holding old dreams.

Beautiful brown eyes girls are sweet dreams for a old man heart.

                        Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[Markus Anthony]

I feel you, and your longing for someone you can't have. I love the descriptions you made of the woman in your poem which made it colorful and relatable.

[Coyote Poetry]

It is good to be a observer of life. Beautiful places and people should left as-is. Thank you Markus for reading and the comment.

[Abhishek Asthana]

The soul and the aura of the poem is so nice... punching of emotions in few lines makes it more beautiful at times when you are writing a piece like this...

Full of innocence...Keep writing and sharing... !!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Abhishek. I appreciate the comment.

[sharonlee]

Hello Coyote, how are you?

Being an observer carries a certain measure of reverence and responsibility to detail... the role of the observer is then an honourable one.
Beautiful detail my friend xx

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Sharon. Good to be a observer and be able to describe what we saw. Thank you for reading and the comment my friend. Please be safe.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest John... a beautiful Artists painting of words of a lovely
brown eyed Beauty with her child. Women are like flowers that
create more flowers in a Garden of Rose of Sharon wonderment
in Scripture. truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Pat. Women, make our world more alive and more beautiful. Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Dave]

This is so beautiful. How nice of you not to intrude on the love the brown-eyed girl was sharing with her child.

In these times there is so much need to show our love, especially to a child. Take care - Dave

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful things, places and people. A honor to see. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Dave]

It's always a pleasure to read your writing.
Take care - Dave

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Exquisite beautiful
Love this
Hope you are keeping well 😃

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Julie for reading and the comment. I hope you are doing well and being safe. I am still working. I am a overnight pharmacy manager. Wife making mask at her factory and my daughter a nurse. We are drinking the hot drinks and doing the baking soda. I hope these bad days end soon.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Oh I haven’t heard of the hot drinks and baking Soda
Keep well x