Your face

Just words

Your face

 

 

 

My crazy world knew no peace till you allowed me to sit with you,

allowed me look into your wild dancing eyes,

be blessed with the sweetness of your voice

I told you with the Summer moon above,

I love your face,

I love how your hair fall upon your forehead,

I love when your face changes when you are wandering in thoughts.

I love the movement of your lips,

moving with every new emotion you feel.

If I could,

I would paint a landscape of your soft neck to tender shoulder.

So I would remember you always.

I love your face,

those eyes of hazel green,

make me wish and dream.

You will allow me near,

allow me to hold your hands and hear your song,

every new morning and every coming night.

You are my ambrosia, you are my lasting wish.

 

 

Dancing Coyote

Author's Note

Some words.

Reviews

[MantaStyle]

It's a poem that expresses love. Sadly, it's just the love of the physical self of the girl. I would have liked it if you had talked about something else other than outwards beauty.

On a second reading however, it gives me less of a feeling of love but more of a stalker-ish vibe. The girl was introduced as someone who allowed the speaker to sit with her. Maybe that's one way to say that they were married or were in a relationship and the girl allowing the speaker to sit with her is just her allowing the speaker to be with her in an intimate way, but given the speaker's shallow description of her it seemed more of a distant crush or a stalker's musings rather than a heartfelt close relationship between the two.

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. He loved to hear her talk and hold hands. Share mornings and share nights. More than physical. A woman's eyes can make you feel loved or hated. My grandfather loved my grandmother face when she was old and gray. Youth goes away and love need to be treated like a flower garden. Treated with care and never forgotten. I appreciate the comment.

[MantaStyle]

Well i didn't know that as it wasn't included in the poem. The only thing the poem told me was about her beauty and how he sees her. I like the poem better now that you gave me more context about the poem, but I think it would've been better if you can somehow incorporate your comment within the poem to add more context to their love. Good luck!

[Chris Shaw]

These are the beautiful thoughts of a man entranced with the facial features of a love. He notices everything about her. Not just her eyes, but the movement of her hair, about her face. He is completely csptivated by her and the way she makes him feel. Peace is hard to find. If she gives him peace of mind, that is a great gift indeed. Wonderful words Dancing Coyote.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Chris. When a woman wants. Can make a man feel important.

[moog-drika]

I just got lost in all these words. You have the power to turn a thought into a beautiful poetry. it's so romantic and fresh! Love it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear poet. I appreciate the kind words.

[Lale]

That's so romantic. I really like it so much. No complex words needed to express love. It's all about the little details that express love in such a profound way. Thank you for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you lale and I do agree. Love need kind reminders.

[Lale]

yes, you're right

[Kaede16]

It's such beautifully tender poem. The description of little details really helps me get a feeling of what type of person this girl is. The picture is also beautiful. Lovely

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Kaede. People, with dancing eyes and who bring joy to us. Are blessings.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear John... the photo captures the beauty of Nature... the flowers are soft as a summer day
where romance lingers ... Your poetry reads like a Novel where waves splash upon the shore. truly, Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Pat. We need to know love. I am a old man now and I have my grandchildren. Reminder me, I will be okay and I m not alone.

[Carola]

lovely romantic feelings, nice poem.
the best part comes when there is more than the physicality of her beauty when you say
" ............and hear your song,
every new morning and every coming night."
the man wants to hear her words, he wants to listen.
cheerio carola

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear Carola for reading and the comment. All of us need someone to excite our soul.

[Carola]

very true indeed!

[Unspoken poet]

be blessed with the sweetness of your voice
I told you with the Summer moon above,

Love these lines, this is wonderful

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear poet for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Just Kim]

This is so very lovely, enjoyed your picture you used as well

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my dear friend. We love the face of our love. Our wife or husband. We see the beauty in their face, always.

[Hayllie]

This is such beauty, a true view of love from one's heart to the woman of his soul! There are not many men that will speak so beautifully about a woman anymore. So descriptive and paints the picture of the words! I really like this!

[Coyote Poetry]

Goes both direction. When we love someone. They excite our soul and heart forever. Thank you dear Hayllie for reading and the comment.

[Hayllie]

Your very welcome I rather enjoyed this read

[Ardra]

Eyes are the way to ones soul.... it's so true... I always love a beautiful pair of eyes....they can hold so much secrets and share a story of their own when you look into them.
And the eyes of your beloved are always nothing short of stairways to heaven ....beautiful and full of love ... I enjoyed reading it John...hope all well in your world.. stay safe...

[Coyote Poetry]

i am fine and I hope you are doing well. Thank you dear Ardra for reading and the comment. The people we love, are always beautiful to us.