The cold night whispered

The cold night whispered

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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Just words.

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                                      The cold night whispered
The April rain hid my tears and I walked alone.
Once  great love turn indifferent and
our love true turn to fathom dreams.

We spoke careless words,
maybe true, maybe not?
Maybe we were grasping at a miracle?

I told the rain,
love died slowly and badly.
I longed for her near,
I longed to hear her heartbeat and her song.

My songbird,
we knew rhyme and song and now,
we know we could bleed.

The cold night whispered to me,
the abyss of love dance,
just great storms we shall know.

Now crimson love touches and
silent goodbyes,
Leave us praying for more.

Now I sit by the sea,
drinking the whiskey and remembering you.
Do you remember me?

                      Dancing Coyote

© 2020 Coyote Poetry


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Coyote Poetry
Some words.

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We spoke careless words,
maybe true, maybe not?
Maybe we were grasping at a miracle?
At times when the other person had enough. Sometimes we cared too much for that person and we end up hurting them instead. It takes time to heal and eventually, the memories left in our hearts are the happy ones.

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Days Ago

I agree my friend. Old age had taught me. Every attempt at love became a kind memory. Thank you for.. read more



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Beautiful. Truly feel the emotion.
Always seems like nighttime is when the memories take over.
The last line is very relatable. We’re always left to wonder if those we’ve left and lost still think of us

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So beautiful! Loved it.

Keep going friend.

Posted 2 Days Ago


Coyote, several quotable phrases and verses in this one. And, that song is the perfect music to pair with it. It's interesting to me how many couples say that's "our song." I ask them if they've listened to or read the lyrics.

This speaks to the pain from a true love, not something on the periphery or short-lived, and so lives the pain. I always admire you can create so much imagery and emotion in a relatively short, simple piece.

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Days Ago

I agree. A sad song. The words are honest. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do app.. read more
R.E. Ray

3 Days Ago

You’re welcome, sir.
We spoke careless words,
maybe true, maybe not?
Maybe we were grasping at a miracle?
At times when the other person had enough. Sometimes we cared too much for that person and we end up hurting them instead. It takes time to heal and eventually, the memories left in our hearts are the happy ones.

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Days Ago

I agree my friend. Old age had taught me. Every attempt at love became a kind memory. Thank you for.. read more

A very poignant and endearing poem. The deep longing was palpable in this lovely write. ~ Helena ~

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

3 Days Ago

Thank you dear Helena. I appreciate the comment.
Your emotions are well stated in this Coyote. You relate to nature in a way that searches for answers. Sometimes there are none, but many try in the only way they know how.

Great poem.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I appreciate the kind words.
This just about knocked me flat. It is exactly everything I am feeling at one time. You have a knack for putting my feelings into words so much better than I am able. Beautifully written, deeply poignant.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

Thank you my dear friend for reading and the comment. All of us have walked in the rain. Wishing for.. read more

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