Very creative. Made me think of a romance novel regarding a married couple who have been together a long time.
I liked this poem a lot.
Thanks for Sharing, Coyote =-)
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Thank you Audie. Just a fun poem. The photo made me do it.
3 Years Ago
I get that, she's beautiful, and is having an excellent time.
You have an incredible way with words and this just proves it my friend! Keep up the continual writing, I loved this, it's a masterpiece!
I love the drama behind it, and the way you've written it is just simply, poetic
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3 Years Ago
Thank you my new friend. I like the Tumblr photos. Give you reasons to create.
You brought us to the scene with you splendid imagery, John. I absolutely love that photo you chose to accompany your words. Lots of sexual tension and desire in this one. Truly an enticing write. Lydi**
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3 Years Ago
Thank you dear Lydia. I loved the photo. The woman looked happy and having a lot of fun.
I really do believe you could make a romantic or sexy poem out of anything, John. Here you have a woman in heels, deep snow and you grasping back. side.. and off the two of you go, She all akimbo and you as happy as.. The fun of the event really comes through whether inspired by that great photo or not. Reckon you could juggle a sweet scene out of two snails in a puddle!
Wonderful fun, and though wintery ~ warming by way of your pleasure and fun! Love it.
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3 Years Ago
It was the wonderful photo dear Emma. Needed a story and a poem. Hello dear friend and thank you for.. read moreIt was the wonderful photo dear Emma. Needed a story and a poem. Hello dear friend and thank you for reading and the comment.
3 Years Ago
Fun, laughter, makes great medicine, especially these days. Keep safe, sir.
I wouldn't recommend in a dress dear Anais. Snow sledding is a lot of fun. You need the snow to be p.. read moreI wouldn't recommend in a dress dear Anais. Snow sledding is a lot of fun. You need the snow to be packed hard for the sled to move easily. Thank you for reading and the comment.
Such a fun read Coyote. Wonderful exhilarating write, taking place in winter whiteness. It's been quite a while since I tried this out with my grandchildren. Your imagery is vivid and the excitement of the occasion and the chemistry really came through. All good wishes. Keep safe my friend.
Chris
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
I hope you can this year dear Chris. My daughter took my grandchildren to the Romeo snow hill. They .. read moreI hope you can this year dear Chris. My daughter took my grandchildren to the Romeo snow hill. They had fun and thank you for reading and the comment.
This made me smile and laugh. The picture didn't load on my end until I was done reading. It is gold. It only adds to the cheeky cuteness of the poem. This is a fun read.
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3 Years Ago
I wanted a fun poem. A amazing photo. Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment.
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